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英语四级写作高分训练月计划第三周:星期一(2)

考研英语  时间: 2019-04-08 14:09:53  作者: 匿名 

  二、用词原则

  1.用词要简洁
  能一个词表达清楚的意思,就不要加上多余的成分,另外还要注意不要造句成意义上的重复累赘。
  如:
  
原句:What you have done is illegal under the law .
  优化:What you have done is illegal .

  2.用词要多样
  注意不要一味地重复使用某个词汇,可适当转换成同义词或短语。也不要一味地使用同一种词性,要学会使用不同的词性。
  如:
  原句:This can definitely make them work more enthusiastically .
  优化:This can definitely stimulate their working enthusiasm .

  3.多用朴素、易懂的词
  对考生来说,生僻或华丽的辞藻驾驭起来比较难,很容易使用不当,很多时候不但不能给文章增色,反而可能会使阅卷老师困惑,起到负面作用。因此,建议考生在写作时尽量选用自己熟悉的词语。
  如:
  
原句:Parents in China always have altereations about their children's education .
  优化:Parents in China always have quarrels about their children's education .

  4.多用具体的词
  如果词的概括性太强,往往让人觉得抽象、笼统,会给人模糊不清的感觉,词义比较具体的词会使表达更加准确、生动。
  如:
  
原句:Some people like to read the newspaper very quickly and try to find some interesting stories .
  优化:Some people like to flip through the newspaper and try to find some interesting stories .

  5.注意使用限定词
  当定作时适当使用限定词来修饰可以使论述更加客观、适度,避免观点的绝对化。
  如:
  
In general , young people seem more prone to job-hopping .
  Nowadays the increasingly severe employment situation is perhaps the biggest challenge facing college students .

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