反面现象批评型

As is shown in the picture(graphcartoon able)，it goes without saying that the drawing aims at revealing a common problem(in China):______.It has attracted extensive attention of the society.Nowadays,increasingly more argumentations about it can be found in TV programs,newspapers,university classes and marry aspects of our everyday life.It s status as the focus of public concern mainly results from its in negligible but harmful influence on individuals,collective,and even the whole world.

It seems to have a strange power to drive some individuals or organizations to act wrongly.The essence of these wrong actions is:(1)to gain personal,short-term and partial individual interest at the expense of damaging others’long-term and overall interest;(2)to adopt improper means to win more rewards with less input.We must keep highly alert of the problems evoked by it,because once the harmful influence accumulates to a certain degree and then spread,it will surely threaten the development of the whole society.Though with various reasons and forms,from the perspective of the essence,the problems brought by it originates from the fundamental principle of human ideology and material production.Thus,we should seek the solutions through setting foot on this principle.

Due to the depth and width of its harmful influence,we should draft our solution scientifically and systematically on the basis of deep analysis of its problem.We must acquire our power from technology,management,law and culture to tackle the problem,effectively eliminate the shadow of___________,and ensures ourselves a bright future.

反面现象批评型1

How enlightening and compelling the above drawing is!It is so funny that whoever sees it cannot help thinking:_____.(这句自己加完整，从宏观上描述一下图画就可以，笼统的，大体的)______while_______.(这句从微观上具体说明一下图画要描述的矛盾点，必须找到矛盾点，用到while这个单词)Simple as it looks,its intended meaning goes far deeper what on earth 　does the drawer really aim to convey.

第二段

What the image above vividly mirrors goes far more than a simple image,instead,it carries a thought provoking social phenomenon:____.(本文的主旨)There are upsetting(如文章不是讽刺性的，就把upsetting删除)parallels today in our contemporary community.For example,______.(举2个例子，如果字数够就举1个)

第三段：

Much can be done.To begin with the schools and the mass media should develop,guide and cultivate noble and worthy values and qualities among people,doing their utmost to awaken people of the growing threat of this worsening situation.(of this worsening situation自己可以换成主旨的词，如果不换，这样也可以。如文章不是讽刺性的，就把worsening删除)What is more,the authorities concerned should play a dominant role in taking nationwide actions to curb(如文章不是讽刺性的，就把curb换成promote)such practices.In conclusion,all the society should make actively more sustained and concerted efforts.Although we still have a long way to go,a promising start has begun,and a happy,healthy and harmonious society may be not be far behind.