分析一:觉得自己没什么思路时间又不够时,虽然构思内容不够丰富精彩,思维短路,举实例!提出一个观点,举实例!提出一个方案,举实例!。至少会得平均分,不要着急。

分析二:在你觉得文章有内容可写,自己观点清晰、分析深刻时,可以尝试写得高分的作文。所以一定要强调构思,这和英语没关系,是思路的问题。但却非常重要。这时套话一定不能作为文章主体。套话要用,但不可多用,并不是看你“因为、所以、例如”这些句子用的有多复杂。但写文章主体时,句式要富于变化!不然文章没有亮点。

第二点:文章模版篇

第一部分、开头:

一、结构: 开头图面描述+小的概括,点明图画的意义,揭示的问题。

在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短

例如As is indicated in the picture, an adolescent is telling his grandfather a good news - he can go to a state-class university with his University Admission Report, while his grandpa has also received his own Admission Report of the university for the elder.(长句) How exciting and encouraging it is!(短句)

二、套话:

1、开头图面描述:As is indicated in the picture, an adolescent is telling

例如As is indicated in the picture, an adolescent is telling his grandfather a good news –

2、小的概括:An overwhelming/ A noticeable trend /situation is illustrated in an explicit(直接的)/ implicit暗示的 manner:

例如A noticeable situation is illustrated in an explicit manner: Pollution poses a great threat to our existence. {Pose a great threat to ~~ (对...造成一大威胁)} 第二部分 (主要是原因、举例和措施的写法)

一、原因部分:

(一)最佳方案:用3、4句话排比,层层深入点明主题。

1、套话 :… can be attributed to dozens of factors.+The problem is not A but B; the problem is not B ,but C; the problem is not C but D. 2、注意:原因分析深刻且有递进关系,这是拿高分得关键:{优秀范例:问题不在于孩子是否崇拜,而在于孩子们崇拜什么人;问题不在于孩子们崇拜什么人;而在于这些人是什么样的人;问题不在于这些人是什么样得人,而在于他们代表一些什么品质。我们应该引导孩子们崇拜那些体现美好品德的人物。}

(二)不会用排比时,这样列举原因: 1、原因不容易缩成从句或短语时:

(1)套话:Why so?In this day and age,后接原因, 在这里用一些精彩的句式表达,词组运用,有能力还可以用一些精彩的词汇。

例如:In this day and age, There is no denying that our educational system leaves something to be desired. {There is no denying that ...(不可否认的...)}

例如In this day and age, knowledge of human beings is advancing at an unprecedented rate in a multitude of areas.(短句) Since the advent of the information era, education has been playing a pivotal role in individual development. We will not be abandoned by the society if we keep learning.

(2)注意:拿不准还不如不用,以免错用。

2.当原因容易缩成从句或短语时…要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,

短句… can be attributed to dozens of factors.

长句To start with, should take the largest share of responsibility of it.

next, in addition, finally

二、举例部分

1、用什么例子,需开拓自己的思路可以举正反两面的例子(以前崇拜毛泽东,现在有人崇拜刘翔。这些都是一些健康的崇拜,当然也有些不健康的,给孩子带来坏的影响。)

模版1)A good case in point is… (2 )For instance,

2、也可以举数字。原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字的,可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一,但编无妨,只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型: According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.

三、措施部分:

套话:To turn the tide或to better the situation , a couple of solutions ,based on the in-depth analysis above, have to be implemented.

+More importantly, every effort has to be directed to …

例如To better the situation , a couple of solutions ,based on the in-depth analysis above, have to be implemented. We should spare no effort to beautify our environment. {Spare no effort to + V (不遗余力的)}

More importantly, every effort has to be directed to …

例句:More importantly, every effort has to be directed to people”s awareness .We should ping home to people the value of environmental protection {ping home to + 人 + 事 (让...明白...事)}

第三部分.结尾 1、套话:

(1)可以用一个经典的虚拟语气的句型。Obviously, it is high time that we did.

例如:The environment being worse(独立主格用法),it is high time that we did our utmost to protect the environment. It pays to do it ,because the more we do, the more we gain。{ So + 形容词 + be + 主词 + that + 句子 (如此...以致于...) do one’s utmost to + V = do one’s best (尽全力去...) It pays to + V ~~~ (...是值得的。)}

注意上句中的独立主格用法,得高分法宝 (2)展望未来类型: We can cherish the hope that, with these keys, we will unlock the door to a harmonious world.

2、结构:文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了