一、更生动的表达法

不应该之说nice这样空洞的词,应该使用一些诸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之类的形象词。

小偷走出房间应该说:slip out of the room老人走出房间应该说:stagger out of the room

二、 多变句式原则 1)加法(串联) 都希望写下很长的句子,像个老外似的,可就是怕写错,怎么办,最保险的写长句的方法就是这些,可以在任何句子之间加and, 但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说: I enjoy music and he is fond of playing guitar. 如果是二者并列的,我们可以用一个超级句式: Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm. 2)转折(拐弯抹角) 我们说话的时候,只要在要点之前先来点废话,注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。 The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.或The coat was thin, but it was warm. 更多的短语:despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding 3)因果(so, so, so) 表示的是先后或因果关系!The snow began to fall, so we went home. 4)失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重) 有些句子脑袋大,身体小,或者有些脑袋小,身体大,文章中出现这样的句子,就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句,表语从句,宾语从句的变形。 举例: Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分: When to go, Why he goes away… 5)附加(多此一举) 那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。 Mr Liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going. 6)排比(排山倒海句) 引用一个个的排比句,一个个得对偶句,一个个的不定式,一个个地词,一个个的短语,将会使文章有排山倒海之势! Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you. We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life. (气势恢宏) 7)独立主格的句子 原理:在学生的文章中,很少发现诸如独立主格的句子,它就是分词的一种特殊形式,分词要求主语一致,而独立主格则不然。比如: The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills. Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China. 如果您可一些出这样的句子,不得高分才怪! 三、文章主体段落三大杀手锏 一)、举实例 思维短路,举实例!提出一个观点,举实例!提出一个方案,举实例!

例如:In order to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted every possible stimulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human performance. For instance, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they fime him or her. 更多句型: To take … as an example, One example is…, Another example is…,

二)、做比较 方法:写完一个要点,比较与之相似的;又写完一个要点,再比较与之相反的;

相似的比较: likewise 相反的比较: nevertheless,

三、换言之 没话说了,可以换一句话再说,让你的文章在多一些字。 短语: put it more simply