2012考研英语辅导英语作文套路
主要原则:
简单化原则零错误原则 纯原则 语法结构:定语从句+插入语
描述图画的形容词thought-provoking/compelling/profound/instructive/enlightening
1.The satirical sketch graphically portrays a scene in which ______________________
It is graphically/vividly/symbolically illustrated/demonstrated in the 图 that___________
2.1) What makes the drawing striking/intriguing/compelling is the fact that __________
2) The most striking feature of the drawing is (the fact)that ____________________
3) As is symbolically depicted in the (first/left-handed)图,____________________
3.其他描写
4.字幕 1) We are informed by the caption that “____________________________”
2) The caption reads “___________”/The caption indicates that “___________”
5.总结(不要用太难的表达,把图总结即可,不一定需要)
Undoubtedly/Unquestionably/Incontrovertibly/Indisputably______________________________
三大套路
1.Ving的处理
1)Standing by the riverside, the Master sighed, “May time pass on and on like this, never ceasing day and night.”
2) Fluttering through the air, we dance wing to wing, life after life, forever a pair.
2. ADJ+N
3. =with+N
With passion/difficulty/optimism/confidence/joy/enthusiasm/grief/sorrow…..
单图:2008 合作
The impressive and thought-provoking cartoon graphically portrays a moving scene invoving two handicapped men. (Depicted in the thought-provoking cartoon are two handicapped men.) The most striking feature of the drawing is that the two cripples, leaving their crutches behind and supporting each other with their powerful hands, are walking forward with confidence and optimism. In addtion, we are informed by the caption that “You have merely one leg and so do I. Helping each other, we can travel around the world.”
As is illustrated in the thought-provoking cartoon, an optimistic and confident man, taking off his clothes, is rushing toward on a bridge from “poverty” to “prosperity”. What makes the drawing intriguing is that the bridge is entitled/ marked as “reasonable system”. Unquestionably, it is the positive politics that has bridged the gap between the poor and the rich.
双图:2006 小贝头
As is vividly depicted in the photos above, Beckham, the handsome British football superstar, is enjoying a striking popularity among young people. In the first photo, Beckham’s name appears on a young man’s face. The caption indicates that worship for the idol is written on the face. In the second photo, this young man is doing Beckham’s chic hairstyle in a barbershop. We are informed that he is spending 300 yuan imitating his idol’s hairdo.
二、阐述段
天龙八部 三分天下
食品安全问题
到底什么是天龙八部? 简单理解,就是八个可以在第二段当中构思的方面。第二段最好是总分总的夹心式写法。其中最最最关键的是现状分析,原因分析和后果分析。注意到,这八个方面是可以构思的方面,不是要都写,都写的话,这一段一般人过200,高手过1000. P2注意尽量控制在6-7句以内.
1.由浅入深:Simple as the picture is, the connotation behind it should be taken into consideration with more insight and penetration.
2.深层含义:Undoubtedly, the purpose of the picture is to convince us that due attention has to be paid to the prevalent and pervasive issue of unsafe food.
3.现状(罗列除了很多可以参考的写法)
1)The past several years has witnessed/experienced the phenomenon that people in growing/increasing/expanding/mounting numbers suffered from the severe consequence of unsafe food.
2)The unprecedented economic development over the past several years is accompanied by the dramatic increase of unsafe food.
3)We can think of a variety of cheating phenomena in our contemporary society, such as the poisonous milk which results in prevalent infant kidney problem, and eggs which contain undesirable chemical factors, all of which are sounding an alarm to our society.
4.原因(写一条就可以,不写也没问题,但是要让文章显得有深度最好分析一下原因)
1). 人们为了追求利润,而丧失了道德底线
2). 国家监管不力,相关法律并未完善,给了不法分子漏洞
3). 万能BT理由,社会压力巨大。(with the quickening pace of life, competition goes increasingly fierce in all walks of life, imposing tremendous pressure on all individuals.)
1)Several factors, both individual and social, could account for the negative phenomenon.
2)The reason for the phenomenon may be complicated, but we can, to a large extent, ascribe it to the following interrelated factors. (1,2两句作用相同,都是引出两条原因。注意没必要两条,一条就够,两条主要是为了层次感)
3)具体的两条理由,On the one hand, a great number of people are only in pursuit of the maximum profit, totally turning a blind eye to /totally ignoring the basic morality of the whole business.
On the other hand, our legal system is far from perfect, which directly or indirectly provides the immoral businessmen with the chance of cheating.
(*)现状+原因(单原因)(其中还有象征点的写法出现)
The irresponsible teacher depicted in the picture is naturally associated with a great number of professors in real life, who are only in pursuit of their research papers and titles, while totally turning a blind eye to their obligation as qualified educators, for the reason that a great number of colleges and universities regard the number of papers as an essential standard to judge a teacher.
5.后果/影响
Professional dishonesty not only adversely affects the health condition of numerous consumers, but also poses a probable and potential threat on social stability.
坏:1.Adversely affect
2.pose a probable and potential threat on
3.exert a(n) unfavorable/undesirable/adverse/negative consequence on
4.sound an alarm to
5. put an enormous pressure upon
好:1.Lay a solid foundation for
2.exert a(n) positive/favorable/far-reaching/beneficial impact on
3.play a(n) vital/crucial/irreplaceable role in
4.serve as a catalyst for
教授的职责:The indifferent attitude towards education not only undermines the teaching quality of universities and adversely affects students’ desire for knowledge, but also sounds an alarm to education system in contemporary society.
Undeniably, this phenomenon will reduce the education quality. And students on the other hand, will have no specific and professional instruction.
6.举例说明 It can be best exemplified by the case of poisonous milk and other dangerous food.(其实就是联系实际,也可以说就是现状的具体体现)
参考:2006:小贝头
Undoubtedly, the photos have subtly reflected the social phenomenon that idol worship is prevalent among the youth nowadays. Beckham represents the image of sport hero whose handsome appearance and unparalleled football skills are passionately adored by all the sports fans. Likewise, several teenage girls won their fame overnight in The 2005 Super Girl Contest in China, which provoked nationwide noisy debates on the value and harm of admiring these idols. Generally speaking, young people are inclined to adore the people who excel in appearance, intelligence or talent.
7.层进的修辞手法和转折的运用
It is undeniable that we must be honest, which should be accepted, respected, appreciated and shared (advocated) by all the businessmen. Regrettably/However, it is ruthlessly and relentlessly ignored in contemporary society.
8.威胁性总结
If we let the situation go as it is, the whole market even the entire society would deteriorate and collapse/ the whole market even the entire society would become unimaginable and uncontrollable/ the whole market even the entire society would become uncurbed.
增补:虚拟语气版:
Were the situation to continue, it would become uncontrollable.
考研第二段就是以上内容的合理整合,加上第一句的论点
Simple as the picture is, its subtle connotation endeavors to convince us that due attention has to be paid to the prevalent and pervasive issue of unsafe food.
和最后一句的结论(威胁性总结)If we let the situation go as it is, the whole market even the entire society would deteriorate and collapse.
中间插入3-4句论据即可,成为一个夹心式的写法。一定不能写太多,第二段控制在5--6句,7句冲顶。
西部大开发
1. 由浅入深Simple as the picture is, the connotation behind it should be taken into consideration with more insight and penetration.
2. 深刻含义Undoubtedly, this picture is thought-provoking, in that it endeavors to convince us that the development of the western part has been a prevalent and pervasive issue.
3. 现状:The past several years have witnessed the phenomenon that people in growing numbers have participated in the campaign.
或:The past several years have witnessed the increasing/soaring passion (enthusiasm) of people to join in the process. 补充:参与/投身于 的其他写法 be engaged in devote oneself in
4. 原因:
1) 东西部差异大,东部很多人生活富裕,而西部一些地区仍然贫穷
2) 这是和谐社会共同发展的需要。
3)BT理由,压力巨大。(稍微改写下,西部压力大就可以了)
这里暂且写一条:Some people in the developed areas are leading a luxurious life while in some underdeveloped regions, a great number of people are still living in sheer poverty.
5. 影响
1)可以有效解决东西部发展不均衡的问题
2)极大提高西部人民的生活水平
3)可以提高西部人民的教育文化水平
一个词:深远!
The movement, directly or indirectly, will exert a far-reaching influence on the western areas even the country as a whole. It can not only alleviate (减轻缓和,不会的话换relieve) the poverty of the underdeveloped areas, but also lay a solid foundation for the education level of the region effectively and efficiently.
6. 层进 西部大开发应该被accepted, appreciated and advocated.
7. 反面论证:要是国家不注意均衡发展,只顾东部,整个国家就会。
Suppose our government does not pay enough attention to the west, our whole country would become unbalanced and unable to survive and thrive (in the ruthless and relentless competition)
或者正面总结:Generally speaking, the phenomenon would continue to exert a beneficial influence on our society, if it is widely accepted, appreciated and advocated.
注:本文并未采用举例说明的论证手段
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